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The Diary Of My Life

I would have cried if I were you. The diary i wrote, to get my voice to you. Tears on my face, rolling down like a waterfall. Standing in the middle, crying in a crowded hall. But no one heard this cry. Comforting me was difficult, but no one cared to try. Looking at the stars at night. Hoping that everything was right. I was never a dowdy or anything. I would just love to write everything. From the reason to my smile, to those uncontrollable tears. I wrote everything down, even my deepest fears. Living under this dreadful ceiling. Difficulties, but am still breathing. As mercy killing would be a crime. One day, Lord will take me out of this grime.

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:21:00 AM

    It's indeed beautiful.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/27/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Adarsh :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Wow asma, this is beautiful yet deep in sadness, your pen follows your heart with this very special poem.

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 2/27/2013 10:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 2:22:00 PM

    Beautiful...That's the best thing to do.Just let it all out! :o) I know what those uncontrollable tears feel like. :o( But shine on!!! And those tears will flow from your pen. ;o)

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 8/30/2012 6:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you sir!
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 2:00:00 PM

    A touching poem also gives me tears on my cheeks. Asma you write beautifully - with compassion. (like your beautiful mother) Warm huggs // Anne-Lise :)

    khan Avatar asma khan Date: 8/30/2012 6:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    its amazing to read such a big compliment. thank you!