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Ouch Low Battery

Low battery

In the wee hours of the morn
She was torn between two pillows;
  Pure ecstasy escalates;
 A blinking Indicator become
A disruptive behavior: suddenly
 A dishonorable discharge

 ouch! sorry low battery.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:07:00 PM

    enjoyed this clever poem, different.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 6:24:00 PM

    nice poem...lol...funny!! Hugs - Laila

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 11:44:00 AM

    Like your humor in this little verse Annie. Come and read my "Three heads" it's also fun. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Hmmm... funny to read... but maybe disappointing at the time... ;-) Terry (nice poem)

    Lander Avatar Annie Lander Date: 8/29/2012 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    just a little humour Terry O/Leary..Irish name one love annie