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Aide-toi, le ciel t'aidera

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Aide-toi, le ciel t'aidera

A brother I want
a sister I sought,
but in the end I am
alone and sad
with my heart contrite
in a rain of tears which I sought to dry
with the love of my dear.
Alas she is not.
For her stay I fought,
but sadly she left,
without a word,
without saying goodbye,
her promises unkept.
Shamelessly she lied.
Oh what a crime
committed without 
shame nor a sigh,
a dishonorable route.
A new girl I shall find
who shall be to me a delight.
Hopefully this girl
shall be my precious pearl
with whom my heart
I shall compart.
Love is multifaceted;
Love is tenderness.

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Tres emouvante..do not dispair you will not find love, it will find you ! bonne chance Patricia

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:28:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Victor. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol