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The Stranger

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The Stranger

I am the stranger that lives inside of you i am with you every day
When the world reaches out and slaps you i come out to play
I feed from your anger for all that you seen 
All the broken promises and unrealised dreams
I rattle the cage you keep me in longing to be free
I fill your light with darkness, taking hope with me
With every slap i am stronger, weaker is my cage
I will one day consume you i am rage.

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:09:00 AM
    Nice write Rebecca! You've used personification very well to illustrate the theme. Just lovely!

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Hi Rebecca welcome to the soup, i like this yes rage can be hard too surpress, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:35:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Rebecca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol