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Desert Rose

Ask me where I hide
Where I conceal my thoughts 
And my darkest lies…
Ask me where I run to
When the moons are full
And there’s nothing more than the devil's grin…
Ask me what I’ve told you
During the latest hours 
Of the darkest morns…
If you would just ask…
I'd just tell you…

My thoughts…they lie beneath the deserts thorn
Under a rose I call my own
Where the crows go to dance
And where warriors throw their mighty lance.
Where the eagles die because of their pride
And where storms turn away, because they need to hide.
Under the thorn of the desert rose…
Where beauty is its game and destiny her thrown 
Alone with her silence of gusts and winds
Alone with her silence…of what could begin…

While the moons are full
I crawl in the devil's place...
Where the pools are dark
And reek of death 
Where nothing else can give in
Where I’m drenched in anger, hate and fear.
Swayed by the gusts of yesterday’s winds
Where trees are burnt covered in thorns of everyone’s sins.
Roses are bleached and covered with ash
Where no one travels against the sand…

Hear my words once again my friend…
I am nothing but living…
Without fear and with you my dear
See my world, hear and feel it…
It is nothing without you
My world turns to coal
My thoughts start to burn
Roses turn to ash
And all I can hear
Is the devil's laugh

*¿Oyes mis suspiros…?
Son para ti mi amor…*


*Oyes mis suspiros...son para ti mi amor*
*Do you hear my sighs...they are for you my love*

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:32:00 AM
    JESSICA, , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in DEBBIE'S Bi-Lingual Poetry CONTEST.. All these entries were fun to read.. thank you for the entertainment, ta ta ~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:06:00 PM
    Hello new poet friend I was VERY iimpressed by this write, if it had had a wee bit more of the foriegn language it would have been even higher. Please DO enter it in other contests and I'm sure it will take a first prize. Absolutely breath-taking ending. {Please consider entering my new contest the free verse form is a fav of mine} Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bi-Lingual Poetry" contest Jessica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Jessica xx

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:04:00 PM
    So creative and full of images from the desert, one of my favorite places. Conratulations.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 6:39:00 AM
    Very very GOOD..you bring the reader with you through passion pain and hope. Please if I might sugest [your verse will not be marked down or held back if you don't do as I suggest] the following editing corrections. [line 6 devil's grin..it is possesive so you put the 's..I myslef have alot of problems wit the s :)][line 11 I'd][line 18 you MAy want throne][line 22 devil's][last english line devil's] this is a winner so it would be great to have the corrections. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this creative write Jessica, well done vie xxx