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Black night  like raven peaks its strides
On ashen wings hung low on breeze,
While moon turns her crepe face and hides
Dragging through seams of vagrant trees.

Just when the thick of fog devours
A hundred moths chain-links the sky;
To pirouette in blazes, shine the hours
Changing eve  with diamond eyes.

Meshed web of stars peeps through frail light
As if to send a dazzling sign,
That glossed winds can unwrap night"s plight
When jeweled bugs and stones align

Nature Theme Contest of Kim Morrison
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:22:00 PM

    this is very pretty,, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Lovely and beautiful piece,Andrea...Congrats on your superb win...

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 9:48:00 AM

    Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 7:25:00 PM

    Love that last line!! When jeweled bugs and stones beautiful !! Congratulations on this winning poem!

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 5:32:00 PM

    Lovely Poem Nette. Thanks for submitting it to my contest. congrats Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Black Diamond Night" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Ahh the mystery of night. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:23:00 PM

    wow Nette luv big congrats on a sensational write and splendid win .. superbly envisioned .. I made a few changes to my Tangana entry ..

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 1:06:00 PM

    Knew it would be a winner..Congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Edgar Allen Poe would be proud. Congrats.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:19:00 PM

    Nette, finally i'm reading my favorite contest winner list.. congrats in Nathan's super awesome "Black Diamonds Night" contest... have a nice day~ Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:58:00 AM

    Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:30:00 AM

    Congratulations nette on you winning place xx

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Lovely poem. Congrats.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your lovely winner.

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Love this beauty - a sure winner here. Thanks, Nette - loved the contest (I think I may have already thanked you, lol) and congrats on all your wins, of course : )

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 4:47:00 PM

    Reads like a winners' circle work..Good luck in the contest..Creative one for sure..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:57:00 PM

    Excellent. Beautifully composed. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:24:00 PM

    Nette, now i'm jealous,,, Nathan, will love your entry..i sure did... it was amazing and captivating,,, . love your entry., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 1:21:00 PM

    Excellent poem. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:33:00 PM

    What a tremendous and wonderfully delightful write my good friend! You have completed a stupendous poem, one of enlightening images and descriptions for the timid soul! I really love the line, as Andrea so loves, "A hundred moths chain-links the sky;" wow, now that is an incredible line, Nette! This is a very special poem, I will always enjoy this imagery, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:28:00 PM

    An excellent write here Nette!Love the imagery very much.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:27:00 AM

    wow, what an image, those hundred moths across the sky! So lovely, nette.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:36:00 AM amazing beauty and stupendous imagery induces a winner here Nette luv.. always captivating to read your words of delightful treasure .. best wishes luv..

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:34:00 AM

    A smashing night indeed..a top winner for sure, nette, hugs:) Jag

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:26:00 AM

    Hi Nette, as always your imagery is outstanding. You vividly describe the beauty of a "black night". Lay

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:04:00 AM

    Wow Nette, you have a great way of putting such poetic words together, love it ! Good luck . Hugs Anne

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:11:00 AM

    A Wonderful night .... one night we can only dream about. - But dreams .... that we must have. - Always keep your dreams Nette. - Hope your poem will bring you good luck in the competition. - Have a lovely Sunday. - Sending many hugs / / Anne-Lise :)