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Dark Angel

Born under a bloody regime
witnessing the worst of crimes
as a child, my people dying
memories, forever last

Rising from the meadows of my suffering
they say my halo is dark
they think of me as an Angel
an Angel of Revenge!

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:19:00 PM

    There are many kinds of angels, dark angels area s essential as white angels, how else could you notice the shine of stars if it weren't for the chiascuro effect of the midnight hour, well said Carlos, have a nice evening, vie

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut Date: 8/27/2012 10:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Indeed, thank you for such a wonderful and smart comment Vie! :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:12:00 PM

    Carlos, this is deep..thank you for the epic image. love your poem.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

    Mongrut Avatar Carlos Mongrut Date: 8/27/2012 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much PD! I picture this Angel as a very passionate Warrior of Revenge dressed in elegant dark clothes!