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Eclipse Moment--Constanza

I watch as the hawk hovers round
Its shadow cast down by the sun,
Battle for life has just begun.

Mother hen fights back from the ground
As the cloud turns dark and wind blows,
bending basils arranged in rows

Dusts swirl,breeze whistled;rain abound
Clouds rumble;people run for shade,
green pigment of leaves does not fade.

As floss and leaves float all around.
Lightning sparks as day turns to night,
Eclipse of the sun comes to light.

Sun appears back where it is found,
high up in  the sky  at  its  post,
giving out heat to dry the coast.


I watch as the hawk hovers round
Mother hen fights back from the ground
Dusts swirl,breeze whistled;rain abound
As floss and leaves float all around
Sun appears back where it is found.


Contest:"Can you Constanza?" sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:58:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:05:00 AM

    Olusegun, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:30:00 AM

    Belated Congratulations on yet another win xx

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Hope the chicks survive. Take care Lee

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:05:00 AM

    Hope the storm saved the baby chicks. I enjoyed the picture you drew. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your great win in this Constanza contest!

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:16:00 AM

    Olusegun, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:42:00 PM

    CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND STELLAR WIN LUV .. A DELIGHTFUL TREASURE TO READ ..

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 9:13:00 PM

    Olusegun,I enjoyed the mood this one invoked. A good topic for a constanza it was! Congratulations on your win in my contest. Glad to see you on my list.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 7:22:00 AM

    Nice write Segun! Thanks for your comments on my poem

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:02:00 PM

    I like your poem, Olusegun, thank you for sharing, xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:49:00 PM

    A fantastic write with wonderful imagery, Olusegun! I love this form and have enjoyed reading your entry for the Constanza contest...love and blessings :))

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:38:00 PM

    lovely write, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )