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Time

While living our lives in daily sequence,
Time slips away without recompense.


8/25/12
For Susan's "Time - single couplet only" contest

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:32:00 PM

    so true. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:35:00 AM

    Your entry was better than mine. Congratulations on winning.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:15:00 PM

    well deserved win, Mandy. Big congrats to you.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:03:00 PM

    So true, Kim...belated congrats on your win with your wonderful couplet! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 8:25:00 AM

    So much in so few words......and time slips away without notice.....that is the part that makes this poem so significant. Cherish each moment is the lesson here. Nice one, Kim!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:24:00 PM

    Kim, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Kim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:22:00 PM

    a poetic germ.. congrats on your super win with huggs! :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Beautiful piece,Kim.Great job..Congrats on your well deserved win..

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on win Kim xx

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Yes, so true. Time seems to glide away, while we are so engaged with the cares of this life. Thanks for visiting. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:45:00 AM

    yes time slips away to fast, a very nice expressed Couplet. Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:47:00 PM

    time is not very nice!! Me likes this!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:01:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest,,, thank you for sharing, xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 1:39:00 PM

    Nice thought. It's true without doubt. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 1:20:00 PM

    Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:39:00 PM

    An excellent entry for Susan's contest, Kim! I do hope to get an entry in your contest tonight. I hope it doesn't fill-up first. I've had so little time to write lately...love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:22:00 PM

    so true - love this thoughtful write, Kim. Many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Excellent couplet developed from the theme, my dear Kim. I will read more of your poems tomorrow! Good luck and best wishes!!!!! love, leonora