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DEPARTURE

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DEPARTURE

“Without departure “

Long expected on this one day,
Heads headed two ways,
Lingering without time,
Doves, glide in to wave goodbye.
Your wings on us have grown.
Never will I fold your friendship like a flag that had flown.
Smiles you are so wise and poetic.
With the right kind of pleasure and pride of your own.
Untied after your rope pulled you another way. 
Free to come back and smile on us one day. 
Barren like gust and sun lighten plumes, on a rainy day.
In my eyes, you will always be the successor that got away.
I’ll await once more for your wandering heart, to compose.
I fell without departure to your notes.
My days will gaze for you to jump in with two feet and return, 
Yet, I will suffer..................
and lump it with a giant gulp, and ask :-( 
Must you really engage us with a sadden farewell?

by;pd

inspired by: David William's............ poem "I"...
~for Joann's contest~

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:41:00 PM
    Wow....kudos to you

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:09:00 PM
    Hi Linda,I posted a couple more poems hope you like them Love

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 3:53:00 PM
    hey pd my bff .. bad news diagnosis on my hands .. partial paralysis permanent on right hand wher two finers were lost .. nerve damage both hand severe .. need more tests .. rhumatoid arthritis is culprit .. no immediate cure or relief .. so .. will just keep smiling luv .. praying and hoping pain goes away .. new baby in 2 days so concentrating on that .. thankxx for being my bff .. keep this tween us please ..bff for life

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 1:51:00 PM
    Endearing words coming from the heart. wonderful write. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:22:00 AM
    By the way, wishing you a dream of holding Jesus' hand again. How I wish I will have another dream like that again. :)

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 12:13:00 AM
    ok... good night my dear friend! i know why you read again my poem of being innocent ha ha ha and telling me to post another poem in my poem for the challenge.. ( no i'm just kidding) by the way our birthday is coming remember and our age will only grow older not our heart ha ha ha..... take care and good night! God bless you! hugs:) leonora

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 5:39:00 AM
    Very touching words! Nlessings to you, my friend! JP

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Lovely poem my friend. 'My days will gaze for you to jump in with two feet and return' The most enticing part for me. Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 9:34:00 AM
    am thinking of u pd my bff as our season has changed from a hot 90 to a cool and breezy 60 pvernite luv .. hope u r well .. new baby will arrive 9/22 and my son will be home Wedns. miss u luv ..

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 10:56:00 PM
    It is very interesting,PD.Well done!

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:26:00 AM
    goodnight to you too, PD!!!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:33:00 AM
    i always enjoy your poems,you are awesome ,and thank you for your kind words to me ,you some one i admire alot

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:07:00 PM
    Here I am again, enjoying this beautiful poem! :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:37:00 AM
    Awww, what a beautiful lyric and wonderful statement. Really like this. Justin

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:47:00 PM
    A wonderful write PD and I agree that inspiration comes and we often fail to recognize that moment. I do need some some at the moment because I seem to be in a slump. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:50:00 PM
    It's beautiful and heart touching beyond words. Inspiration many times comes so silently that we often do not recognize it and miss it. If it is felt it can lead to a creative write like yours. Great work PD and Hearty congrats on your win my friend and thank a lot for your words and greetings. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Poet D

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Thanks, thanks and thanks again and again. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:00:00 AM
    been 2 the parting of the ways, not a word to change the day, passion gone to my dismay, move on sidetep the hurting, hey... love it p.d......

    JOHNSON Avatar DON JOHNSON
    Date: 9/7/2012 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    will love be kind another time, or will you run away, the hurting tears do strike one blind, have passion if i may, or forgotten, cast away, when fortune goes astray, begone oh hurting day.... 'Departure' p.d. Don
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:43:00 PM
    Such a flow, P.D. You got game, girl. Checkin' in on my faves. You're one of the top on my list. Don't have much time. Workin' 12 to 36 hours at a time without sleep. Harvest season in the south. Bye now. Gotta rest. Hope to post soon. Have much in my head. Love ya...Caleb

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:05:00 AM
    Congtratulation on your win, that's a very heartfelt expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

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