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In this Battle to find a True Man

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Below is the poem entitled In this Battle to find a True Man which was written by poet Julee Gnanaratnam. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In this Battle to find a True Man

You said you'd always be there
And never let my heart tear
My past made me think the 
worst
It was hard to trust you at first
I kept barriers with the way I 
felt
But your words made me melt
You proved you'd never make 
me cry
So I thought I'd give you a try
Your presence brought me joy
You made me believe I was no 
toy
Things started to go well
You were the one I could tell
Just as I started giving you my 
heart
Things began to fall apart
All the promises made you 
started to break
I finally knew you were so fake
You mesmerized me with your 
charm
And acted like you were no 
harm
But all you ever wanted was a 
pass time
You treated me cheaper than a 
dime
It was a joke to you all along
You didn't care how much you 
did wrong
Now I'm left to think how blind I 
became
I was so stupid to fall for your 
game
You must be so proud to be you 
I bet I'm just one of the few
Your game will make you go 
mad
When karma gets you so bad
Yours actions have made me 
stronger
Now I'm ready to fight harder
I won't be a fool no more
Its like being in a war
In this battle to find a true man

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 1:02:00 PM
    wow,the search goes on,a bitter battle,well now you are stronger and wiser and you have a idea what to look for,sad write Julee,check out my Girls Girls

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam
    Date: 9/9/2012 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You and I will
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:30:00 AM
    There should be a like button on this site, cause I really like this poem.

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam
    Date: 8/31/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:14:00 AM
    This happens over and over and over. You WILL find that true man... and you'll know him when he comes by! A good write Julee... welcome to the Soup! Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxxx

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:38:00 PM
    We all fight for true love....and you will find it. - Well written Julee. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:00:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Julee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam
    Date: 8/24/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Interesting write, but it's too long to be considered a limerick poem.

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam
    Date: 8/23/2012 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You. I am not familiar with poem forms. What would the form of my poem be?