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  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:39:00 AM
    HI Loo Roll love this poem very much !!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:03:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Loo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:34:00 PM
    hahahahaha. Whoever you are, Loo Roll, you ROCK. And don't forget to shove off all the other personalities abiding with this person!

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Awesome poem Loo, welcome to Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 8:54:00 AM
    Cute poem Loo. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry. - oxox // huggs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Wicked twist at the end.