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P oetrysoupers who write words in a cluster
O rdinary people who give all they can muster
E xuding confidence for all to see
T antilising words of rare beauty
S imply written for all to enjoy

and a second attempt

P rose perfectly penned
O bviously or obliquely opened
E xciting erratic engaging
T ranscending tangable typing
S ingular in its entirety

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:23:00 PM

    wish i could catch this at the moment of the post, the second one is outstanding-Lucas.

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 11/11/2012 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Lucas thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:09:00 PM

    Both are good,,,, though I like the first one better, have a great day Owen ;}

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 9/16/2012 1:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Debbie thanks for the coment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:57:00 AM

    Excellent! Great acrostic... either way! Noticed Golden Girl is featuring you this week... well deserved! Cheers!

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 9/6/2012 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Jack thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:33:00 PM

    I go for the first one here,Owen:) But both versions are really great my friend..and I`m such a big fan of acrostic poems! Take Care,Arild

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/27/2012 5:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Arild thanks foor the comment have a good week my friend, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:22:00 AM

    I can see the merits of the second piece, but for me the flow of the first one gives it the edge.

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/27/2012 5:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Nick thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:27:00 PM

    Very nice! I prefer the 1st one...But both are great!

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/27/2012 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi dan thanks for the comment have a great week my friend, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 12:43:00 PM

    This was a cool way of writing Owen, I liked it!! xoxo - Laila ;)

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Laila thanks for the comment, have a good week, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 5:05:00 AM

    Owen well I love both of them, I think it should read Tantilising....how was the hol? all refreshed now! David...

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/23/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi David still on hols but had a couple of writes while here, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:56:00 PM

    hmmm, i can't decide which one I like better they are both equally good.

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/23/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Andrea thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:17:00 PM

    I like both versions, especially where you have done all words on a line starting with the same letter. What does the word for T means in your first version? I could not find it in the dictionary.

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/23/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Joann thanks for the comment and seeing the deliberate mistake lol, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:05:00 PM

    Owen, I am hooked on both ;) tc Wilma

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates Date: 8/23/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Wilma thanks for thecomment, all the best Owen