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A Sad Kiss

Married forever and a day they were
They walked through life hand in hand
Never a cross word heard between the two
But an illness took over his body one day
On his death bed one last kiss they shared

She couldn't bear to be without out him
A month and she was in failing health
I gave her a hug and a sad but loving kiss
We all will be fine now go be with Uncle Lou
Their love is forevermore in heaven so true


Written for P.D.'s "The Kissing Game Contest"
My Theme: A Sad Kiss
Written: 08/22/2012
By: Carol Brown
10th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:28:00 PM

    I am happy you decided this poem for my contest... love the sad theme...pd

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:41:00 PM

    I have witnessed exactly this with my grandparents, my grandfather went first, my grandmother was devastated and went shortly after almost like God meant it to be, lovely write Carol

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 5:05:00 AM

    Carol, very beautifully written, I love the way each word has perfect meaning to a relationship that has been for so long and how we fail to understand the love never dies out. Takecare Saleem

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 1:54:00 PM

    I love this! The sadness she felt when her husband passed. It's amazing, truely

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Carol, very touching and heartfelt, you convey the loss of these lovers so well. Enjoyed it!

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 7:03:00 AM

    the passion in this is beautiful i love you beautiful poetry kiss love duncan and ceizar

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:37:00 PM

    awesome poem,,,, reminds me of the song by Kathy Mattea/ Where have you Been",, she wrote it about her grandparents. Love conquers all. you have a blessed day Carol ;}

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:39:00 AM

    Carol,thank you for giving us fantastic poetry,you are a poetess par excellance,I am extremely grateful for all the warm wishes on all my wins,you have a warm and caring heart and i am lucky to have you as my friend.thank you.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:48:00 AM

    Thank you, Carol. I really like your poems, especially this one.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:26:00 AM

    LOVLEY POEM CAROL I DID WRITE ONE FOR PDS CONTEST TOO BUT WAS TO LATE ITS CALLED THE KISS OF LIFE CONGRATUL.ATIONS ON WIN X DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 2:43:00 PM

    Beautiful, though bittersweet, Carol..Great poem for the contest! Best of luck. I enjoyed reading it as I go through my period of grief. Love you. Annalise

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:39:00 PM

    A very sweet and emotional poem......

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 9:01:00 AM

    A very sad but an o so sweet poem Sara...congrats on your win. Thanks as always for visiting and commenting. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:50:00 AM

    My warm congratulations on your win my dear, Carol. This is a fantastic write though sad. Thanks also for dropping by and and congratulatory comment. More power and blessings to you everyday!!!!! hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Hi Carol long time no see, I loved this it reminde me of my father and mother in law and touched me deeply, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:01:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this sad kiss, Carol.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Their love is forevermore in heaven so true i think so

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 1:03:00 PM

    So sad Carol. I loved it. Keep up

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:10:00 AM

    It's a lovely and sad expressed story poem, Thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:24:00 AM

    Thank you ever so much to all who have read commented and congratulated this piece. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:09:00 PM

    Oh so sad but oh so sweet, my dear Carol! A beautiful tribute... love and big hugs, Jack xxxxxx

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:16:00 AM

    love this Carol, wonderful.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:55:00 PM

    I think you meant "one day " in the fourth line. A fine poem, nonetheless. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:29:00 AM

    So, so sad, but so good. Good luck in contest. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:53:00 PM

    Sad. Very touching . Well composed poem. Tfs

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:02:00 AM

    The last line is the essence of your poem and it's sad no doubt, but really a sad kiss. Best wishes for the contest. God always bless you. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:35:00 AM

    very nicely composed

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:34:00 AM

    Very touching write on true love. Congratulations on the win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:44:00 PM

    This is so sweet and amazing. Nicely written :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:45:00 PM

    sweet - glad it was a winner

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