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Days of Crystalline

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Days of Crystalline

While midnight bats are gnawing gnats and feasting free unseen, 

A toddler’s fed from garbage sheds an elegant cuisine.

Along the trails in distant dales a lonesome wolverine

Feigns appetite on fogy nights and days of crystalline.

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  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:47:00 AM
    Love the poem Well done

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Yep,yep...You should have kept going? I could have thrown a couple lines in there for ya to ponder...Ha,ha. Like the flow ~~~ :o)

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:35:00 PM
    yes, I agree with harry - awesome. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:38:00 AM
    inspiring poem this Terry. awesome.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Always something lovely from your pen Terry, love it - oxox // Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:06:00 AM
    loved the rhyme and flow it just show;s how talented you are thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:16:00 AM
    awesome imagery Terry sending chills up the spine to engulf this write.. luv the rhyme too..it adds flare to the tragedy luv..

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:06:00 AM
    Terry I like this but, I feel there at least a couple moe stanza's......it has great flow....David

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:47:00 AM
    Great poetry..love it! Jag