Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

In The Beginning

tristen temple Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled In The Beginning which was written by poet tristen temple. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by tristen temple

Best Tristen Temple Poems

+ Fav Poet

In The Beginning

Taunting winters became the seasons in life, for most of us
Various their storms have proudly brewed?
Running as fast as we can
Within tiny circles, we have thus so ran....
Innocent precious babies; oftttimes their little eyes
Flowing with salty tears
If in fact but a metaphor could bleed
Its myriad of somber moments; about our heart's?
Spiraling this rain; drenched aneath such pain
They say two wrongs never make a right
Fire's that beget their flames....
Burning swords still melting amid timeless hands
Battle cries calling unto shadows bent; upon stained knees?
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

...."In The Beginning" *  

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:54:00 AM
    An appreciative thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Tristen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:27:00 AM
    tristen your elegant talent shows in every line of visual imagery flowing luv.. may I say thankxxx for all your expressive words and comments which lift my soul to new heights.. u r amazing to read and share thoughts with on every level luv..

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 PM
    You're looking at life at a different angle than me. It is decently descriptive.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:04:00 PM
    You have a unique way of wording your poems. Love the imagery!