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In The Beginning

Taunting winters became the seasons in life, for most of us
Various their storms have proudly brewed?
Running as fast as we can
Within tiny circles, we have thus so ran....
Innocent precious babies; oftttimes their little eyes
Flowing with salty tears
If in fact but a metaphor could bleed
Its myriad of somber moments; about our heart's?
Spiraling this rain; drenched aneath such pain
They say two wrongs never make a right
Fire's that beget their flames....
Burning swords still melting amid timeless hands
Battle cries calling unto shadows bent; upon stained knees?
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...."In The Beginning" *  


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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 10:54:00 AM

    An appreciative thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Tristen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:27:00 AM

    tristen your elegant talent shows in every line of visual imagery flowing luv.. may I say thankxxx for all your expressive words and comments which lift my soul to new heights.. u r amazing to read and share thoughts with on every level luv..

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 PM

    You're looking at life at a different angle than me. It is decently descriptive.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:04:00 PM

    You have a unique way of wording your poems. Love the imagery!