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In Silence Eat Chocolate Cake

Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake  
When I arise my dessert walks behind in ripple shake


Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan
Contest: 1 rhyming couplet or 1 rhyming triplet

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  1. patrikar Avatar
    apoorva patrikar
    Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM
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    Lonely and in silence I eat chocolate cake even if its not for me, its something i'll definitely take!!!!

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 8/30/2012 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you're an amazing composer!
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/29/2012 9:49:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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    Matthew Anish
    Date: 8/27/2012 9:51:00 PM
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    Tell me about it! Cake is so.... tasty and has such a bad effects on the waistline. Enjoyable short poem. Love & Peace Matthew Anish
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 8/26/2012 12:23:00 PM
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    Oh, to funny..congrats. BG
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 8/26/2012 6:34:00 AM
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    Oh lovely still giggling congratulations Sara xx
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/25/2012 11:25:00 PM
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    I've done that many times....Congratulations friend Sara...Great poet you are. Have a nice day!!
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:19:00 PM
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    So sweet! Congrats on a great win!
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/25/2012 9:03:00 PM
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    SARA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 8/25/2012 7:06:00 PM
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    Congrats on the win with this funny piece! Jag
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    Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/25/2012 5:38:00 PM
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    Oh, I am so there... well done. Love your poem. Love the truth in it too. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/25/2012 5:09:00 PM
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    Sara this one pulled a deep belly chuckle from me, but it is true...too much chocolate cake will create ripples in the behind...cool write...congrats on your win. One love. Joy Wells
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    Vicky Tsiluma
    Date: 8/25/2012 3:26:00 PM
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    Congrats on your win Sara! Just lovely!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:49:00 PM
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    I remember this one for sure. BIG congrats. It really appealed to me.
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 8/25/2012 12:20:00 PM
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    Too funny, Sara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 8/25/2012 11:06:00 AM
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    Thanks for breaking the somber mood ot the other entries. Needed a chuckle. Love, Joyce
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/25/2012 10:20:00 AM
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    Very funny... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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    bl devnath
    Date: 8/23/2012 11:33:00 AM
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    Hi! my sweet friend, we are with you. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
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    Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 8/23/2012 9:45:00 AM
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    ha ha..this poem is funny Sara. best wishes in the contest!!! xoxo - Laila
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/22/2012 11:52:00 AM
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    sara!.. love your funny bone... really enjoyed the pleasant mood of this piece.. win it!..:) huggs!
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    harry horsman
    Date: 8/22/2012 9:59:00 AM
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    Oh this is brilliant, Sara, wonderfully funny.
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    Anthony Nutter
    Date: 8/22/2012 8:06:00 AM
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    Put a smile on my face, a moment on the lips a lifetime on the hips.
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    cory long
    Date: 8/22/2012 5:07:00 AM
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    I love your sense of humor.. this is a great entry for the contest.. good luck with this gem.. Have a great day!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:26:00 PM
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    hahahaha. This is WONDERFUL. So clever, and I bet Susan will love it.
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 8/21/2012 5:41:00 PM
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    haha watch those ripple shake,best wishes Sara
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 8/21/2012 4:04:00 PM
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    Sara, in your second line, did you really want to include the word "dessert"? What you have there is the dry place with a lot of sand. It's still a good write.
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:54:00 PM
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    This one is hilarious my friend! I think yours is the first humorous one that I've read for this contest, I'm glad you did one! What a masterful delight you have created here Sara! Great Work!!
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:16:00 PM
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    LOL, this poem is too funny Sara. best wishes in the contest luv. Love, Gail
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/21/2012 2:08:00 PM
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    LOL, had a chuckle at this one, my friend
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/21/2012 11:28:00 AM
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    You could have shared with me, Sara !!! - :) :) :) - Well done, luck to you in contest ! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)


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