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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Life seems to stop when the phone rings, talk about priorities! Sounds like you've been there. Great one for the contest; all the best!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:43:00 PM
    love your rhymes Jag,great write

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Smashing in it's form and metaphors! Places audience beside u in the seat.....very well written!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:55:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..I wonder what the call was about..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:53:00 AM
    This reads to me a scene straight out of a thriller movie. Very well narrated, liked the cell services part a lot. It was nicely thought out. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:16:00 AM
    eerie but good like it Jag xx