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DESTINED- Shadorma

My clenched fist holds mesh of luck lines threads of fate stitching life imprints of many struggles I fight destiny 21/08/2012

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:43:00 AM

    YESHA, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:54:00 PM

    Creative winning work..Congrats on being in the winners' circle..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:13:00 PM

    this is oh so creative,i couldn't think of anything so intelligent,wowo...congrads Yesh on another great win...

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:44:00 PM

    A fantastic write, Yesha! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:23:00 PM

    Ebaar thami kemon......

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:13:00 PM

    Excellent!!This is called micropoetry!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:15:00 PM

    Control your own destiny. Another good write Yesha.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:49:00 PM

    ahh yes..I think we could get a few great haiku from this..[nails make crescents/in the palms of my hands -- angry tears]there are many haiku here! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:45:00 PM

    wow, this is stunning imagery to relate your fighting destiny by the clenched fist and all that one's hand symbolizes with life lines, etc. a GRAND write!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:52:00 PM

    Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading your creative work...Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:50:00 PM

    powerful write, Yesha - love it

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Philosophical and fascinating...enjoyed! Goodluck!!!Jag