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My First Kiss

It was a sunny and bright Sunday evening
All of us kids were gathered under the cellar
I the mommy and the neighbor’s son the daddy	
We fed the children and sent them off to school

Daddy said “mommy just a kiss and I’m off to work”
I peeped around the column looking for grandma
She was nowhere to be seen so I kissed daddy
Then I sent him on his merry way to work
With his banana leaf lunch bag and clay food	

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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 3:16:00 PM

    Aw! Innocent love and our first sweet kiss... I still remember mine! BTW thanks for dropping by and checking out my poems, dear friend! Relatively new here and still finding my way around! Love and big hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:02:00 PM

    That's so special 'touching, beautiful relationship is the dream of all dreams thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 1:00:00 AM

    A very touching poem about innocence. Love it! Congratulations on your win,Joy. Suzette

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on a wonderful rendition of a child's game. So manyof us used to play 'house.'

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Joy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:14:00 AM

    Now the secret's out. Congratulations, Joy.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:41:00 AM

    congrats Joy on a super win for this phenomenal poem on first kiss.. lovely lines .. I so enjoyed.. thankxx for prayers for my many health ussues.. I feel them luv..

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Joy xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:31:00 PM

    This was a very cute description of your first kiss. Very sweet.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:54:00 PM

    Lol..excellent..at someone remembers their first kiss!!! Good luck in the contest!! :)