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Magic Carpet ride - With Poet unknown

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Magic Carpet ride - With Poet unknown

We fell onto the carpet
Deep into each other
Not realizing we started to sail
High above cloud fear and uncertainties
We gave in to our basic feelings
Naturally coming to the surface
The carpet sailed above the fireplace
But its heat seem to go sailing with us
The warmth spreads over my being 
Like a burst of sun through rain clouds
Driving me to heights of ecstasy sublime
On this magic carpet I feel the magic of your love
Our passions mingled intertwined fused
As the words from our fellow poets on PoetrySoup
Our magic carpet comes in for landing
Reluctantly we step off into the world of reality
Leaving me with the insatiable need 
To go magic carpet sailing again


Written By:  Joy Wellington
Aug 20 2012
For ~Skat~'s  Contest:  Magic Carpet Ride

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Joy. Love, Carol

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/7/2012 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Carol!
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:22:00 PM
    HELLO SWEET JOY , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/4/2012 10:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Much thanks to you ~Skat~ for a super win...I am humbled, because I went up beside a lot of great poets. One love.
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 12:32:00 PM
    Congrats on your win and Whew! What a ride! :) Tanya

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/4/2012 10:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    smiling here Tanya...and a ride it was...one love.
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:49:00 PM
    HI JOY, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, I WONDER WHO THE UNKNOWN POET IS... :-) always~PD

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnx PD!
    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ssshhhhhhh!!! LOL!
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations Joy, what a wonderful ride and win xx

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnx Golden Girl!
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 4:58:00 PM
    well, yes, indeed! Such a wonderful ride, i think i would want to go sailing again too. hugs, catie :)

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sure sis, that's the idea...lol!
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:55:00 PM
    I can relate to this magic carpet ride! Your poem painted a passionate ride between lovers. I enjoyed reading it Joy. Good luck in the poem. Dalila

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Only lovers can relate Dalila...says something about you! smile.
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:20:00 PM
    I like you poem..nicely done.. good luck in the contest. cory

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnx Cory!
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 12:06:00 PM
    A romantic and magic ride on the carpet, Joy. - Lovely written - Wish you luck in contest (and love). - Have a beautiful new week. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Wellington Avatar Joy Wellington
    Date: 9/1/2012 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Tnx Anne Lise...enjoy the weekend and the new week to come.