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  1. Date: 8/21/2012 1:58:00 PM

    thought provoking indeed - very clever write, Doreen. Congrats on your wins : )

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright Date: 8/21/2012 7:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Why thank you Jack...I am grateful and thanks for your comment.
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 6:23:00 AM

    'Let he who is without sin cast the first stone'...yes, God loves us all no matter who or what we are...an insightful and wisdom filled verse, Doreen!...Have a blessed day - Tim

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright Date: 8/21/2012 7:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Amen Tim!! I agree and appreciate your comment. I really do...
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:41:00 PM

    I love how you put into this one. God calls her beloved. We are all loved of our father in heaven. Very interesting one! (great title)

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright Date: 8/20/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you kindly Andrea!! And yes WE are :-)
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 6:17:00 AM

    This caught me off guard Doreen...love the last three lines...the ending made it powerful...makes you think of your own life and the trials and tribulations that one goes through day to day...we are all God's children...just believe in him...excellent piece.

    Wright Avatar Doreen Wright Date: 8/20/2012 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Ink. You understand what I write about. I agree with you 1000%.