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A Spanish Shadorma

in Madrid lived a dark-eyed boy - Eduardo like my youth that young, wild man *tan guapo vanished from my life *tan guapo = so handsome

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  1. Date: 9/17/2012 3:46:00 AM

    That haiku is Not for Debbie's contest Andrea.I just posted it.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:39:00 AM

    ANDREA, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Sad that he disappeared from your life..Congrats on your win in the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:37:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:49:00 PM

    oh la la oh la la those handsome spanish men. love this one and my imagination is running away. ha ha love phyl

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 6:37:00 AM

    I think I may have seen him... love those spanish boys. Well done, take care Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:33:00 PM

    I enjoyed this cute, or should I say "handsome" write, Andrea! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:57:00 PM

    Hello Andrea, i wish we had tan-guapo here.... lol.. and i think you spelled it wrong.. it called.. papi chulo.... <-- lol...kidding... what is Eduardo... anyways...this was fun... i feel like looking up that word.. chances are eduardo, means handsome as well... ta ta for now...pd

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/23/2012 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    eduardo was his name, silly. Eduardo Collado Romero. I still remember after all these years. People in Madrid tell me that he disappeared after I left. Nobody has seen him in Madrid since. it's a mystery to me!
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:51:00 PM

    I enjoyed your shadorma - those dark eyes. Hope your enjoy your ride on my carpet.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:45:00 PM

    awesome essence for contest theme Andrea.. good luck luv.. my first hubby named Eduardo..oh..

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Memory lane? A cute little piece ;)

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:22:00 PM

    A glimpse into the memory bank leaves emptiness with no one to thank. A spanish boy who caught your eye. Disappeared from sight, did you cry? :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:23:00 PM

    clever write, my friend (I'm losing it - I just called Russell 'Andrea'...) Congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:22:00 PM

    A nice poem. Congrats on your recent win and cheers Andrea!

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:39:00 AM

    Awwwww....this is really sweet. I loved it! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Is shadorma Spanish for shadow? Duh. This one takes several readings and it gets better with each one. Love, daver

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2012 8:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Shadorma is the name of the form. This is a contest for the form shadorma and it's a spanish form!
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:02:00 AM

    You know Andrea, both kids of mine were not walking until the age of 1yr and 3 months almost but they started talking by 9 months. We were bit anxious abt the walking part so asked the pediatrician. He said that they get their work done by talking so they do not need to walk!! Funny. But now both are physically very active too.

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 2:54:00 AM

    so this is how you write this form? thanks for your visit to my feeble attempt. awesome this.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:31:00 PM

    Tan guapo!! I am looking for one ha!ha! ha! But, they vanished due to age unfortunately! Hey thanks for your rescue Andrea! OK, OK, I need a cable, and now I have one! Another thing, I found out I can buy dvd's for a dollar in the pawnshop, Ha, ha, ha! I promise to write more, if you promise to edit them, Ha!, Ha!, Ha!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 10:33:00 PM

    Just answered your comment at my page "Raindrops Falling".

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:37:00 PM

    That's a lovely expressed Shandorma, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:45:00 PM

    In reply to your comment on "my sonny boy", he's almost two now i.e. in oct end he will complete two years. And believe me Andrea a lot many more antics added to his character apart from those described in the poem, if I would write about those it would be making for a lengthy epic!! Yes, but rock star for sure he is!! Thanks dear for all your sweet comments. Love always...Yesha

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:34:00 PM

    andie, i love how you weave the concept of unruly youth; this is utterly charming!... muy bien!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:16:00 PM

    Andrea very cool this, I like it....ciao

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:24:00 AM

    Lovely Shadorma dear Andrea. Yes, you taught us a good word to describe a handsome man without him knowing it :))! ha..ha..Good luck, sweet friend.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:32:00 PM

    Very good Shadorma with some Spanish touch.Got to learn some Spanish from you..I am not finding any topic to write for this contest....Hasta luego.....

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:03:00 PM

    ow.... this is wonderful! we are using some Spanish words in our country and it's quite easier to pronounce than other languages. Most Spanish men are also handsome (smile). Thanks for sharing this poem, Andrea and thanks for your wishes. I love Celine D's songs. Good luck always in all the contest here. Have a blessed-day!!!! luv, leonora

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:19:00 PM

    What a delightful little poem my friend! I love the Mexican saying within this write! What an awesome Shadorma you have written Andrea! Great Work!!

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/22/2012 9:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol...Andrea... i love calling myself a Mexican,,,, it's the Mexicans who get mad when they meet Hispanics, like me.
    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/19/2012 7:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    careful my friend, don't let the Spanish hear you call them Mexican! they get a little crazy about that!