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  1. Date: 10/5/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Hi david nice one like this very much my friend thinking of you and wishing you well as always, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:08:00 PM
    Great topic and presentation of the topic..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work was uplifting..I have posted another work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Fabulous! Love it! I have only written 3 Pantoum poems and really like the form. Again, Fabulous in thought and form. Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 5:24:00 AM
    Hey good one, David. like this form of poetry, which you have complimented with this wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:33:00 AM
    A very well crafted Pantoum David. Loved the line "A torrent of tears helped it go". wonderful work and good luck to you.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Perhaps you can find more pennies down the road David...thanks for sharing. BTW, I need to read what a pantoum is! Dalila

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 4:47:00 PM
    Love this Pantoum. Enjoyed, David.

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:28:00 PM
    Pantoum is an interesting form (though seemingly difficult)... excellent poem! Terry

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 1:09:00 PM
    aweee.. Sweet David,,, that is some fate down the drain.... I'm glad this is only a poem.... cause your hear right now... still making your future... always..pd

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:05:00 PM
    nice pantoum David...Joseph

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Wonderfully written piece here David! I really enjoyed this incredible nature of how you have written this poem my friend! This write came together very nicely, a wondrous Pantoum! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:40:00 AM
    For some reasons pennies have always facinated me..nice plunge into pantoum form! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 10:38:00 AM
    boy, that was ONE pretty penny you lost. Wouldn't it be marvelous if the penny had such value for us. But instead, it is going to fade one day into oblivion. I love how you pantoumed this one, david. you really did the form well!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:06:00 AM
    nicely penned good luck in the contest.. So much for letting the world know TPS took down the blog

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 6:27:00 AM
    Very good David - do not cry....I send you a new - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 6:16:00 AM
    Clever and nifty Pantoum, David!...reads like a winner! - Tim