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Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/6/2013 9:57:00 PM
Great write you got here,,, Happy New Year ;}
harry horsman
Date: 12/19/2012 1:45:00 PM
checking out your first post here on soup, not diasppointed awesome poem...
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/29/2012 3:51:00 PM
I see you have not tried a quintain [YOU can do it!] I hope you have entered my contest? Light & Love
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 10/29/2012 9:58:00 PM
I just happened to stumble onto this poem. I love the rhyme and development of your poem. Great job.
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2012 6:40:00 PM
Keep your heart open there are people worth entrusting it too. I am sure many can relate to your experience, I know I can. In the end the risk is worth the pain, I met my sweetie 19 years ago and she has been the best gift I have ever received. Based on what I have read you are made of to good a stuff to be broken, probably just bruised.
Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/19/2012 2:39:00 PM
awesome write you got here Rebecca ,,,,, have a great weekend ;}
david scott
Date: 10/9/2012 11:48:00 AM
sorry just poped by again haad to read this as so cool wicked pattern too xx davidscott
david scott
Date: 9/26/2012 12:03:00 PM
SIMILER TO MY TROUBLED SOUL AND STATE OF MIND POEMS WICKED INTROSPECTION XX DAVIDSCOTT
Lee Ramage
Date: 9/23/2012 1:48:00 PM
One thing you are not... broken. Such a great poet. loved your poem. Lee
jim joyce
Date: 9/10/2012 10:08:00 AM
one heck of terrific poem :))))..u really have alot of talent:)))..u say exactly what u want to say ..the right words the right mood :)))
counselor mahmoud
Date: 9/9/2012 4:04:00 PM
honesty . it's fabulous poem (verse) that's my tongue couldn't be able to pronounce how much it be pretty words ... go ahead , will you be a brilliant poet. who spreads the lights in everywhere .. hat off
jim joyce
Date: 9/9/2012 5:02:00 AM
ur poems are awesome ...they seem to go straight to the heart of the matter :)))))
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/2/2012 5:58:00 PM
Very nice !! Love this deep piece. I wrote one called Broken Pieces. Same kinda theme. I love yours!! Hugs Michael
Louis Borgo
Date: 9/2/2012 2:52:00 PM
Excellent poem love the phrase Something inside me, Always on the verge. Restless, anxious, Threatening to emerge "
Owen Yeates
Date: 8/30/2012 6:17:00 AM
Hi Rebecca like this hope you soon mend and find someone who will treasure your heart, all the best Owen
Adeleke Adeite
Date: 8/29/2012 8:38:00 AM
Guard your heart hon. there is always a king who deserves and will preserve your heart. Congrats on having your great poem being featured on the PoetrySoup Homepage this week, keep tapping from the incredible ink flowing from your honoured heart. Wishing you many more features in the future. Love, Adeleke
Terry Cunningham
Date: 8/29/2012 8:36:00 AM
I hope you have more to read soon!!!!
Terry Cunningham
Date: 8/29/2012 8:35:00 AM
I like this piece so much, I thought I should say so.. Thanks, TC
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/26/2012 7:34:00 PM
REBECCA, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD
tristen temple
Date: 8/26/2012 7:10:00 PM
*.# Hi Beautiful Becky, Can I Call Your Precious Heart, BB ? Anyway, Just Wish To Congratulate Your Lovely Light Upon Both Joining TheSoup & Being Featured * Quite Gripping Yet, Within A Wonderful Way ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*
Robert Pettit
Date: 8/25/2012 10:05:00 PM
Welcome to the site. You are off to a good start with this first submission. You have decent descriptiveness and rhyming here.
Donald J Bennett
Date: 8/23/2012 11:45:00 PM
Healing not only makes us stronger but also wiser and the scars left in place are simply reminders of how we lost our way. Good write.
Terry Cunningham
Date: 8/22/2012 10:08:00 PM
Something inside me, always on the verge. restless, anxious, threatening to emerge.. Awsome.. I'm surprised after reading your one piece, that your comment was on the one of only maybe three in forty years that was, not sad.. Thanks, TC
chris lane
Date: 8/18/2012 10:52:00 PM
Great write! I believe we all have been broken from time to time! I'm a work in progress myself.Lol Take care Chris
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 8/18/2012 5:59:00 PM
That cracks heal but some scars we learn from. Enjoyed. Michael.