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AN OLD RIVER

I know an old Town.
Older than the River Nile,
Romantic like Rome,
Undeafetable like Israel ,
Fearless likr a Lioness, 
Rubust than a cotton tree, 
Enormous than an ocean,
I know that Town that i am talking about 
That has no Culture or tradition,
Which enable them to be  free-minded people.
I know that Town,
That people don't shed tears.
Sojust imaging how that Town will 
Look like in your imagination.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2012 3:58:00 PM

    it looks like heaven,great write Christiana and welcome to the wonderful world we call Poetry Soup

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:25:00 AM

    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Christiana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 08/21/2012

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:31:00 AM

    Christiana, i long to drink from that river then i know i will be freed from this fever and have joy like a river even forever. Love your poem.

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:38:00 PM

    Christiana I know one too..David