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I Wish Upon a Star

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I Wish Upon a Star

Upon my sorrow’s pillow tears fall soft, 
yet gentle soothing dreams appear aloft
to fill my heart with promises of you,
and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue.

I gaze up to the starry skies above.
Upon a shooting star I wish for love ~
to fill my heart with promises of you,
and banish lonely thoughts so filled with blue.

I gaze once more; the stars they seem to say:
"Love's wish fulfilled"; my heart knows you will stay!
Protected in your arms at last I know,
our love forever found will bloom and grow.


Sponsor Tirzah Conway 
Contest Name: Shooting Stars  
Repitier Poem (not listed under "Form"-see notes)

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:10:00 PM

    Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:34:00 PM

    Great one expressing how we wish upon a star sometimes..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win Lucretia xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Carol. Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:18:00 AM

    congrats on this winning poem, enjoyed.

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you harry. Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:33:00 AM

    Lucretia big congrats on your win...David

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David. Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Loved this form, Congrats on your 5th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/20/2012 5:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Tirzah. :) Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:12:00 AM

    I love that you gave yours a romantic twist. Interesting poetry form that you showcased.

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/20/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you enjoyed this love poem, Andrea. Take care. :) Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 6:23:00 AM

    What a wishful and hopeful poem Lucretia! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/20/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you found hope in these words of love, Russell. :) Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 3:07:00 AM

    Love this it is melancholy but so nice a the end xx

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/20/2012 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your kind words, Mandy. :) Lucretia xx