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Numbness

~*~ It so cold outside, Its raining hard The clouds are dark and grim But no more grim than the darkness Of the pain I feel within.. The darkness it engulfs me It wraps around my soul I can only wish for numbness For this pain I cant control Shall I write until my thumb bleeds My hand bruised , My fingers seized Ill carve words unto the page until it sets Slipping back into the darkness Yearning for a sleep with no regrets Locked in silent madness Infesting my mind with drowning memories Hoping that prose will let me find my sleep Trying to find a dream thats mine to keep This darkness will continue without a fight For theres no reason for hope without the light.. ~*~

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:24:00 PM
    Wow I totally feel like that sometimes....sigh. Thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:39:00 AM
    WOW!! This is what I have been looking for. Deep and Throbbing Pain... Thanks, TC

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:39:00 AM
    WOW!! This is what I have been looking for. Deep and Throbbing Pain... Thanks, TC

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:55:00 AM
    Tracie ......superb........David

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 4:38:00 AM
    Spectacular writing Tracie.Its good to see you`re posting again.May sound weird,but I love dark poems.Enjoyed reading it:-) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 12:04:00 AM
    Darkness can teach us why we should fight, for survival,for light, for love! Much of my strength & wisdom has been born from that terrible teacher, Pain - I respect your style, and your candor - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 10:31:00 PM
    Amazing verse here. Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 7:23:00 PM
    This is an exceptionally fine write. Im going to fav it. BG

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:20:00 PM
    Good to see you here again, Tracie! Though sad, your poem is quite lovely. Hope to see more of you here at the Soup. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:29:00 AM
    I think this is one of the very best poems of yours I have ever read. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:20:00 AM
    Wow Tracie, this is a truly remarkable write my friend! I really enjoyed this glorious and tremendous poem! I just love the dim view that this poem exudes, a dark feel throughout! The beautiful power behind this grimness is stupendous! I love this write, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:04:00 AM
    Hi Tracie, a wonderful write here, lets hope the light gets through soon xx

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:43:00 AM
    Wonderful Dark poem, Tracie, well written, and a joy to read.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Regret nothing... In the darkness we are trapped inside our minds. Look hard enough and you'll find the light.. I'm so so proud of you... I Love your poem...Love ya cory