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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 6:45:00 AM
    Hi David great words my friend, have just been walking my dogs and kicking those very leaves you mentioned, hope all is ok with you, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 1:40:00 AM
    Enjoyed the reflective feel you have employed here David, (well done)

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 8:36:00 PM
    oh maybe this was it? I think it was a sonnet I had seen!! and I had seen this one already here at soup. it's beautiful.

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Wonderfully described the scene of autumn. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 4:51:00 PM
    Great imagery. Especially love the first two lines of the second stanza.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:28:00 PM
    well, I really enjoyed this autumn ramble, David. Love it when you ramble!! What a beautiful sonnet.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:38:00 PM
    phenomenal imagery fashions this piece David to a winning wonder luv..

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Great work here David. Lovely sonnet Thank you for your comments on my Autumn Colors. Pretty tough task to condense such glory into six lines. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Great work..Enjoyed reading your sonnet that expresses your love of nature's beauty..Soup mail soon..Thanks for stopping by my work..I appreciate your kind review..Sara

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:04:00 AM
    this was amazing nicely done.. Soup mail cory

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:03:00 AM
    This is excellent David, truly a poetic masterpiece,

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Wow, this is one of your best sonnets you've written my friend! I know I haven't read many of your sonnets, but this one has to best the best one I've read...incredible David! You use of rhyme is simply outstanding, and the flow is wondrous, it follows the sonnet rules perfectly! I am impressed, Great Work!!

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    Date: 8/17/2012 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think I forgot how to type this morning.... "...has to BE the best one..." & "YOUR use of rhyme..." sorry about my errors in my comment, but hey, it happens!
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 8:06:00 AM
    It is a pleasure to be reading so many diverse poems this morning David. I am very happy to have been able to read yours. Thank you for sharing your well written poetry. Have a very beautiful and joyful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:08:00 AM
    A very creative and wonderful poem you've penned, David providing me a vicarious experience of the season. I love it. Thanks for dropping by and your spirit uplifting comments. Good luck always!

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:03:00 AM
    Whose being a mister smarty pant this morning? love it xx

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Beautiful Sonnet on Autumn. Very apt descriptions of the season. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:14:00 AM
    Nature so beautifully described

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:02:00 AM
    Very nice (as usual)... beautiful imagery... Terry

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 3:26:00 AM
    the picture painted comes into view, when summer is on the wane, words a flowing straight n true, well said, good sir, I says again...