Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

GEOLOGY

Sara Giroux Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled GEOLOGY which was written by poet Sara Giroux. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Sara Giroux

Best Sara Giroux Poems

+ Fav Poet

GEOLOGY

                         Excavation begins,
                             chisel strikes
                            hardened rock
                                 surface
                        So uncompromising
                     that not a mark is made.
                             Another more
                            powerful strike
                            breaks through,
                             a small cranny.
                                   Slowly,
                                  precisely,
                                  painfully,
                           the work pays off.
                            Layer upon layer
                               lies beneath,
                           how disconcerting,
                          so much more work
                                to be done
                                  to reach
                                  the core.
                                   Steadily
                         each layer fragments,
                                  revealing
                                 yet another,
                               hardened more
                             by time's passage.
                             The digging down
                            seems endless yet,
                           with sweat and tears
                               and little sleep,
                              the work is done. 
                                  The journey
                                 to the center
                             reveals the magma,
                                  the essence,
                               the truest form,
                                  beneath all
                             the hardened rock.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 3:44:00 PM
    I love the way you have layered this poem. :-) The best is usually found after much digging and very deep, beneath a hardened exterior.... X, Su

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Great poetry I am reading from you, welcome to poetry soup my dear, hope you enjoy it hear and make some new friends, love vie

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Great one....I do have a poetry of that kind ,but unfortunately it is in Arabic only...Regards,Hammam Hamad