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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 5:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Autumn Fall Colors" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:56:00 PM
    A lovely write, Yasmin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 9:01:00 AM
    congrats yasmin on a lovely win with this vivid view of Autumn colors luv .. awesome ..

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 9:28:00 AM
    My Yassie lifts me in the swirls of autumn colors. Need to find you when you get lost; how does this happen? I'm sick and the cough sounds like a diesel engine! Hope you are ok my sweet! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 5:58:00 AM
    Dropping in with a Hi! dear Yas. I know you are busy with the holy month of Ramadan. Here we have holiday for Eid on Monday. Bacchas are good, chilling out with three days of no school. I am not exactly delighted with their leisure though!!:))

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:48:00 PM
    Nice tanka for the upcoming autumn season. Those five colors you have mentioned in your second line certainly are a "riot" of colors.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Awesome poem! Can't wait for auntumn. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:46:00 AM
    I miss all YOU GUYS AND DOLLS TOO>>>I am moving and super busy...u know that...tell Jag to relax! hahahaha.....luv u Yas...With Autumn around the corner, this one brings about a cool autumn breeze! Lovin' it! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:12:00 AM
    Lovely Tanka, my dear Yas. You paint Autumn right before us with your amazing words. good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 2:52:00 AM
    Thanx for the visit, Yasie, i too miss Gwen nowadays..looks like she is forgetting u and me..this one is a colorful poem except that i have no idea what this bedews Gwen, u too befuddle me with new words and expressions, luv!! Jag

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 10:58:00 PM
    awesome,,, Yasmin,, good luck...pd

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:37:00 PM
    wow, you covered every space of your tanka with the luscious beauty of autumn. this is the perfect use of tanka.I was going to use that form too but ended up thinking of something else. I really love how you did your entry, sweetie.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:46:00 PM
    riot? waiting for fall.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:20:00 PM
    We are about to go into spring, but I enjoyed this tribute to fall/autumn. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
    Hi Yasmin very beautiful pallette of colours indeed, good luck in the comp, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:50:00 AM
    pretty good i like it

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
    Beautiful, Yasmin, simply beautiful !!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Ah my autumn girl, lovely swirls you create with your rustic colors and rich palette of beauty, have a great day princess Yasmin, love vie

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:57:00 AM
    A beautiful and colorful autumn poem Yasmin - Luck in contest for YOU!!! -Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:57:00 AM
    wow, this is so awesome, yasmin, in fact a palette of vibrant hues.