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When You Sleep



                                          When the day is over
                                          Lights are turned off
                                          Silence of the night
                                             No birds singing
                                   The moon lights up big and yellow


                                           Your eyes are closed
                                           Dark long eyelashes
                                      A hint of smile on your lips
                                Your long brown curls on your pillow
                                              Your body rests
                                      Breathing quiet and relaxing
                                 You are so beautiful when you sleep


                                    Use my senses....listen and feel
                                       Peace and quiet of this night
                                           Like a shining jewel
                                              Love and beauty
                                          for people and nature

      










15. August 2012
A-L Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 6:12:00 PM

    One can feel the stillness of the night when you describe it. Yes, that is when everything is at rest. It is beautiful. Replenishing, putting back what was taken. Awesome, Anne-Lise. Have a happy May 1st too. Summer is almost here. Yeyy!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2013 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 5:30:00 AM

    So peaceful..i like:)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/6/2012 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sharon, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Wish I could sleep a sound night as lately my sleep pattern has turned to getting up every two hours and I used to be a 9 hours sleeper. Love the peaceful scene you have penned. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 9/4/2012 3:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Phyllis, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 2:00:00 PM

    Anne,i miss you and your kind comments,say something my sweet lttle friend...

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/30/2012 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Was away for a while - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 11:07:00 AM

    A good night sleep is precious. A beautiful expressed poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/29/2012 11:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:23:00 PM

    Is this about your hubby? :o) "Love and beauty with nature" That goes so well :-) Very relaxing poem here...Ahhhhh~~~ oxox f.e.f

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2012 12:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "long brown cruls"...no, not my hubby :) - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Dan. - oxox f.e.f. love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:11:00 AM

    perfect timing my favorite poet Anne..I'm about to sleep...Goodnight with love zzzzzzzzz. thanks for sharing.. **Mary**

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2012 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good night sweet Mary, sweet dreams - Thank you for visit and comments my poem before you ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 8:45:00 AM

    lovely soothing and relaxing write, Anne Lise

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2012 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jack, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Anne, even in my sleep with closed eyes but opened heart i could see your pen and your mouse touching many lives and giving meaning to so many dreams. Keep it on and on, great job. 0x0x

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/21/2012 3:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Fisayo, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 1:53:00 PM

    I like this.Beautifully expressed

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kate, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 11:31:00 AM

    Love this! It is beautiful. Nicely written :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2012 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 3:55:00 AM

    A write as lovely as you Anne-Lise. Enjoyed reading your poem and many thanks for your inspiring comments always.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/20/2012 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yesha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Anne Lise, what a gem this is.. A lovely write and you incorporated nature into it as well.. Hope you are having a fabulous Sunday.. Love and hugs Wilma xoxo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wilma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:44:00 AM

    Excellent way of expression of sleeping state. Sweet smile send to you. Thanks for ypur comment on my write. Loved always, bl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bl. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Sweetly done! Anne Lise! Thanks for visiting my work! Jimbo

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2012 7:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jimbo, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/19/2012 2:11:00 AM

    dropping by to send you sweet wishes on a warm sunday's rest, anne..:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2012 4:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sun but not warm sunday in Norway - thank you Nette. - oxox // huggs Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:22:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your poem... You ask about my troll poems... They are meant to be big, funny, silly, bumbling creatures that mean well but just don't think like we do. Poor misunderstood souls. Have a good week end.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2012 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And they are......all that in your poems Carol - love the trolls. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 9:07:00 AM

    wonderful poem Anne...thanks for stopping by....hugs...Joseph

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2012 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/18/2012 6:56:00 AM

    with soft rain today, i wish you a dreamy day, anne.. happy saturday!..:) huggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2012 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Happy Saturday Nette.....rain in Norway to...hugggs back to you....// Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Beautiful words! Good job Anne!!!! Take care

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2012 3:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:44:00 PM

    I can feel the caring from your words as you watch over someone special to you. Just lovely! - Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 5:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:43:00 PM

    sensitive and serene Anne-Lise.. a lovely feeling so engaging to read and emote.. I am felling 50/50 so am countng it all good.. luv..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Linda-Marie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:28:00 AM

    What a serene, beautiful poem this is. :) I hope all is well. I love it! Always, Laura

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:52:00 AM

    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Anne Lise. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:56:00 AM

    You're a great poet, Anne-Lise. I've enjoyed reading your poems. Best wishes and luck to you always!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora you are a great poet to, my friend - oxox love // always Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Excellent poem, Anne-Lise. You're absolutely a great poem and one of my favorite. Thanks for sharing! Thanks for stopping by to read my recent poetry! luv always, leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Leonora, thank you for visit and comments my poem - always welcome - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:42:00 PM

    Absolutely beautiful, my dear Anne Lise... so sweet and tender! A great big thank you for all your kind, and many times humorous reviews of my poems since joining! You certainly have made me feel welcome... love and big hugs, Jack xxxxxxxx

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 1:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jack, I love to read you poems! - You write so good and funny. - Thank you for reading and comments my poem. - Always welcome, back to mine. - oxox big hug back to you my friend Jack. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise <3
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 4:37:00 PM

    Anne Lise; this is one beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Ahhh! So descriptive and loving..Must be a child that is asleep...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2012 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:05:00 PM

    it's been a while sence i,ve seen someone sleep. i think it's about my snoring.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2012 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ....lol..... - Thank you for visit and comments my poem John. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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