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  1. Date: 1/7/2013 5:15:00 AM
    Yes, we can everything we need inside ourselves. God equips us like that. Great poem, David. Love that peace!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:07:00 PM
    This is absolutely beautiful. I love the form. I love how the last line of each sentence is repeated in the following line. It flows so nicely...I'm lucky to have your help. Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 12:07:00 AM
    Nice write, thank you for your kind comments on my poetry, you brought a smile. =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:18:00 AM
    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today David. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:16:00 PM
    wow, methinks this is also done in wreath style. Awesome entry.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:57:00 PM
    Excellent write, DavidI This is another unique verse you've penned. I like the repetition of words at the end of each line. Good luck!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 4:07:00 PM
    This is a beautiful wreath poem my friend! I really enjoyed the well roundedness of this incredible poem! So very wonderful, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:03:00 AM
    Hi david yes I believe that peace live in our hearts and minds to, wish it could be past telepathically or by heart replacement surgery, perhaps to the war mongers of this world, I like this very much my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:17:00 AM
    I'll bet it was a real mystery... nice one like this but am going to bed ..