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First brush with romance

Under the bejeweled canopy of night sky Tension crackles, sparks fly in summer breeze Awkward silence, unsure and feeling shy Roof top view of fruit laden mango trees. Craving, longing for the forbidden sweets Tantalizing touch's soft enigmatic imply Behind fluffed clouds, a blushing moon retreats Magic mystifies as the courtship days pass by Fragrant soft whispers loving and tender Love's mellifluous question, a natural reply Dream drifting lost senses surrender Enraptured heart does a silent sigh Tasting romance's first ever luscious bliss Stars adorn the dazzle of the first kiss. 15/08/2012

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  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:48:00 AM

    Congrats on the win!!See Debbie is saying you are a Sonnet master...

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:44:00 PM

    I see this was a winner. And very well deserved it was, Yesha. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Very good..you are a sonnet master! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Beautiful! Congratulations on your win, Yesha. Suzette

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 12:57:00 PM

    A lovely sonnet, song for your kiss. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:49:00 AM

    Whew!...Love this one, Yesha! Beautiful and romantic from beginning to end...congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 2:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on another smashing win Yesha xx

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 4:01:00 PM

    lovely sentiments in this beautiful engaging write filled with emotion Yesha.. adore it..

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:08:00 PM

    wow, what a love sonnet. There is nothing like first love and those marvelous feelings, as you brought forth in your sonnet. And about what I do with pennies. I just throw them into my purse and sometimes they come in really handy when I need to pay for example a dollar and 2 cents but all I have is a five dollar bill. It's much easier to hand the clerk my five dollar bill with two pennies and just get back an even four dollars in change!

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:08:00 PM

    also I get good luck. Do you think?

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 1:25:00 PM

    what a beautiful write, my friend

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 7:04:00 AM

    Very tender words and feelings, a true winner.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:53:00 PM

    Lovely Romantic Sonnet on first kiss.I loe the flow very much.

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    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 8/15/2012 8:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love the flow
  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:51:00 PM

    A lovely romantic Sonnet by you Yesha.I liked the flow very much.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 7:53:00 PM

    Reading your very beautiful and romantic poem has made this morning bright and wonderful! Good luck to you, Yesha.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 9:25:00 AM

    You have handled the theme well in a subdued womanly way, Yesh!! Jag

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:41:00 AM

    Very romantic.

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 4:48:00 AM

    Yesha woohoo you swept me off my feet with this one, very romantic write, I love it..David