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Then Now

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Then Now

Then... In your eyes my love once showed In your smile my heart did grow In your touch my passion flowed Now... In your words my heart breaks In your arms I have no place In your life there's no space Lay

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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:51:00 AM

    gut-wrenching in all it's beauty,lay... love the emotional appeal of this write, so straight from the heart.. superb, oh wow!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:49:00 AM

    Sad but well expressive poem of love lost...Sara

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:38:00 AM

    :( Sad . . . but, like the poem. - Hope your heart will be happy again......soon. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 9:23:00 AM

    the weakening of love,pump it up and see if you can get back then,lol great write Walayee