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Vampire's Kiss

Vampire's Kiss

      I listen to her soft sighs
        She closes her eyes
      I nibble her neck again
      My fangs pierce a vein
        Then I feel it flood
            Ahhh, human
                 Blood!

Jack Horne for PD’s Kissing Game contest

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Jack. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:41:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Jack! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:26:00 AM

    love it!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:06:00 PM

    Congrats on your win,Jack! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 9:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Jack urgh xx

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 11:49:00 PM

    Good poem, Jack... Congratulations on your win! Terry

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 11:01:00 PM

    Good poem just in time for Halloween. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Hi Jack,,,,, Congratulations with your wonderful and sweet kissing entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:28:00 PM

    GREAT way to do vampire kiss, JAck. short and bloody sweet. haha

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Okay, reads like a winner for I know PD will like this one..Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 2:17:00 PM

    This is a very special write my friend! Very awesomely written and perfect in many ways! What a fabulous piece! Great Work!!