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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 10:44:00 AM
    Very clever David! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 3:45:00 PM
    David,, congratulations in RIX's "VIDEO GAME EXTRAVAGANZA" gaming contest.. :-) always~TEX

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 4:15:00 PM
    Wonderful and very creative piece,David...Congratulations on your super win in this contest..."But you cannot take over our planet without a fight"..Hahahaha!Kudos to you,pal..

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:52:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Congratulations - this must have been alot of work.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Congrats on your win!! I like it!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
    This entry placed high bc one of the judges saw u becoming a child again to construct the shape and u described the entire game's plot in a few lines...solid fun here, David! Less is MORE at times, right?...Congrats on your 2nd place!! gwendolen

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    Date: 10/12/2012 10:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ps..don't point that RAY GUN at me! lol
  1. Date: 10/12/2012 5:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Video Game" contest David. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:13:00 AM
    where is dr who ...exterminate exterminate.. good one mate....

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:26:00 PM
    hmmm, I think I figured it out!! This is one I will never do!!! hahaha Creative one, David.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:47:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest..Sure it will be a winner..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Hi david very good my friend, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen. soupmail

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Not going to happen, green slime. We found out your secret - you can't survive rock music, and this planet is full of it. Good write, David. Love, David

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:09:00 AM
    I wonder if our wordly cousins will know the Dalek, i remember 1966 when we arrived in New Zealand, my son had one with him, brings back memories does this, Oh by the way i like how you have created this.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:22:00 AM
    Amazing! you are so creative! Good luck to you!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Awww...... so creative, David. Good luck again!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 3:00:00 PM
    LOL..I LOVE Dr. WHO..all of them!!Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:37:00 PM
    A UNIQUE POEM DAVID, WELL DONE !!! - Luck in contest!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)