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Shooting Stars

Looking up high in the sky
      I can see light passing by
            Forming like a kite tonight
                  So colorful in sight

                        I know it’s shooting stars
                              Shining brightly from afar
                                    Releasing itself from the universe
                                          Falling like rain showing it’s fierce 




Written for Tirzah Conway’s "Shooting Stars"
My Theme: Shooting Stars
Written: 08/12/2012
By: Maria Paz Samelo
8th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:26:00 AM
    This is a creative and imaginative write. The imagery takes the reader on a journey into the night sky, nice job

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:39:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:16:00 PM
    Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 5:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Mary. Love, Carol

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much friend Carol...I'm so happy, this is my first time to win on this site :)
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 4:28:00 AM
    love this Mary, the theme and the form and shape all work for me, congrats

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Harry...congratulations too :) Have a nice day!!
    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Harry..congratulations too!! :) Have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 3:36:00 AM
    Mary big congrats on your win..love it...David

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/21/2012 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend David..Congratulations too...(^_^) thanks for your support....and for all your comments on my poems...
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win my dear friend! You made it!!!!!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/20/2012 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot my friend...You're a part of it...God bless you always!! (^___^)
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 2:05:00 PM
    Lovely write, Congrats on your 8th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/20/2012 8:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you much friend Tirzah for choosing my poem...I feel so happy!!! have a nice day!!!!!! (^___^)
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 8:03:00 PM
    I like this one Mary. The style is intriguing the stair step reminds of the shooting stars decent

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/20/2012 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Anthony for appreciating my poem...take care!!!
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:38:00 AM
    great write Mary,good luck

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/14/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks to you my friend Richard...(^_^)
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 5:13:00 AM
    Mary, I love this one - very well done - Wish you luck in contest! - oxox // Love Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/14/2012 11:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    many thanks to you my fav poet ;) have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:10:00 PM
    Wow! I love this one, my friend! You're so creative! Good luck always!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks my friend Nore...God bless! (^_^)
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:36:00 PM
    nice write Mary...enjoyed...always...Joseph

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much Joseph :)
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Peaceful joy....I like this one too! Mary....jimbo

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend James..(^_^)