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BATHER

BATHER

She’s naked
Well? – perception naked
Existing with them all
In an obscure, spray-saturated atmosphere
An almost steamy dimension.
The poly-synthetic, strained drip
Along her streaming, rubber thighs
A chemical blue become plunge
Become weird, relaxed intensity
And those shouts!
Lay about
Shout!
Play
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  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:33:00 PM

    Wow, I'm trying to figure out what this write is about, Daver. Not about a tree, for sure...I'm afraid to give an "emperor's new clothes" response! You've tailored quite an interesting write here, Daver!:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki

    austin Avatar daver austin Date: 8/14/2012 3:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's strictly an impression inspired by a sexy female bather, and how the surroundings affect the senses of the observer. Actually, no explanation is necessary. The impression is left up to the reader. Love, daver
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:04:00 PM

    Very vivid and enticing description of bather. Well done. Amazing work. Thanks for your kind remarks on my poem Let There Be Light. I admire your judgement. Regards

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 2:14:00 PM

    Love this line: "An almost steamy dimension."

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:40:00 PM

    david, I like the imagery in this one but it's kind of hard for me to understand a few of the lines. Anyway, she sounds like a very interesting bather.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:18:00 PM

    the thrill of your call invites, daver... sheer dleight!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:48:00 PM

    You haven't lost it yet Daver; well put today.."

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:13:00 AM

    You definitely took me there with your visual write Daver :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Daver I Love this little sight into life by a pond or sea, ...David