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The Presence

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The Presence

Iam at my very 
beginning old shelter,
Yet I feel very lonely,
Is it something that 
missed my heart?
Churn'd my smooth heart.
Iam like a cassoway bird 
Chunk'd from flying.

I lay down on my cot 
with closed eyes,
Yet a pair of twinkling 
eyes never leave me,
Is it something that 
missed my heart?
Oh I yearn for you.
A home to my heart 
went far away
As if vanished in the
deep blue sea.

I tried to sit and write,
Yet a speed calligraphic 
hand crossed my mind,
Is it something 
that missed my heart?
I realise that my future 
lays await.
Someone who is waiting 
for my 
homecoming
Whose in his heart is 
my home.

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  1. Date: 8/17/2012 6:28:00 AM

    nice write Watisungla,love the concept

    Ao Avatar Watisungla Ao
    Date: 8/17/2012 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richard thnx 4 ur lovely comments :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Quite a lovely one born of a lonely heart for homecoming. It's with deep reflective insight. I love it.

    Ao Avatar Watisungla Ao
    Date: 8/17/2012 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Fisayo thnk u so much 4 ur lovely comments :)
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 12:21:00 PM

    Lovely expressions shows you have great potentials. With best wishes..Ravindra

    Ao Avatar Watisungla Ao
    Date: 8/15/2012 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ravindraji thnx 4 ur comments..
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:10:00 AM

    You made a : L.. O .. N.. G.. very good poem, like it - well written from the top to bottom! - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)Welcome to visit mine poems. :)

    Ao Avatar Watisungla Ao
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnx Anne Lise :) wel jus checkin ur lovely poems :)
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:52:00 AM

    Wonderfully vivid.

    Ao Avatar Watisungla Ao
    Date: 8/12/2012 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnx :)