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  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:37:00 AM
    enjoyed this David, a wonderful love poem, never goes out of fashion.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:20:00 AM
    Hmmmnnnnn.... so sweet, David. I am sure your wife will be extremely happy when you recite your poem in front of her with flowers and chocolates. Congratulations too for this wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 3:01:00 PM
    Your wife should be very happy to be compared in beauty to the dawn. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:26:00 PM
    This is a great observation of the basic necessities for life, the desire to live it, the satisfaction that you are alive, and the gratitude to be there breathing another day! What a beginning to a new day my friend! My eyes slowly open, they won't flick open, at least I don't think they can, I move slowly early in the morning! But then after a small amount of time I am full steam ahead! Wonderful piece David, Great work!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:51:00 PM
    Always good to keep in with the Missus David; ( she sounds a mean one ) L O L best wishes Joe..)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:04:00 PM
    what a delightful melody that celebrates life in its finest sense, david!... i like, like!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:17:00 AM
    it's nice to see people welcoming life with such a smile and be grateful for it : ) I've really enjoyed this poem. Have a lovely day : )

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:45:00 AM
    I like this simple but very nice approach you took to the challenge, David. It's for morning couplets, right? What a wonder to awaken to.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Thank you for your congrats, David! Gratitude is the understanding of the fragility of life....and a humble respect for our existence...well done! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Well said Dave... Many I hope share this feeling, I know I do.... Michael