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'Confused Space'

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'Confused Space'


I think I’ve faltered again I crossed that line The one I promised Never to cross again Under my skin, You seem to be again How did you get there? Do you even know? That you are there again? Maybe you are not even aware That you faltered again - You got me, in that confused space Where I know what I feel, But I am so not sure if I want to feel it again
*tongue in the cheek write on love* ©120820121545

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 4:53:00 PM

    Hey Wilma great tale in this emotion filled write Thesef scenes are exeptiinal; in their sharpness, giving closeness of feeling to the reader.. Well done here.'

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:06:00 AM

    Not a comfortable space !! But, when is love always comfortable !! I do like this poem!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2012 4:13:00 PM

    Promises to self are easiest broken. I know all too well the space you so eloquently describe. Good writing, my friend. :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 3:00:00 PM

    break up get back together break up get back together ect. ect. i hate that.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 1:53:00 PM

    yes, it can be a daunting feeling, my friend -well expressed and well written, as ever. Have a great day lfde

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:16:00 PM

    love way to long for answers to love's quizzes, wilms.. this radiant style becomes you... so lovely!..:) huggs!

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 8/16/2012 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    *lovely* way
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 9:09:00 AM

    Hey! You be vulnerable - a bad way to be. Stay cool, Wilma. Great write. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:21:00 AM

    Hey Wilma, i love this, yet it is sprinkled with sadness,

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:16:00 PM

    That "space" is very tricky.Lol Nice poem Wilma. You are very gifted and talented for sure. I love reading your poems. Take care Chris

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 3:42:00 PM

    I like it.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:34:00 PM

    lol..keep your window open,CTC--> you got something coming southbound:-)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:19:00 AM

    Wow, very deep Wilma. This definitely stems from a very powerful space. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:18:00 AM

    Excellent write,Wilma:) Never easy to be in that confusing space,ey? You sure put your soul into your work my friend:-) See Ya`!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:48:00 AM

    This is really good writing, WIlma. You are a wonder when it comes to philosophy on love!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:39:00 AM

    If you not are sure....let him wait. - Like this one Wilma, very good!!! - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - Always a pleasure.../always welcome ! :) - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 10:00:00 AM

    Tug of war at the heart. It amazes me, that once we turn on the love, it never turns off, when we love down to our core! I feel the emotion in this write Wilma. I have a pure admiration for Your work! The Scribe ML

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:23:00 AM

    Wilma I thought by the title you were writing about the inside of my head, I like it, tongue in cheek or not...David

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:05:00 AM

    Perfect, perfect.... The inner soul of a deep poet exposed and naked in words.. An inspirational Lady... Im happy I can call a real friend... hugs and luv and few kisses in the dark lol... Me being me...MJF

    Falotico Avatar Michael J. Falotico Date: 8/12/2012 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Just trying to come out of my shell lol