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SORROWFUL SILENCE

An empty heart like a hollow can tinkering on cobble stone grounds The longings of loneliness mirage soft echoes of whispering sounds In the depths of darkness the deafening chorus of silence surrounds. 12/8/2012

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  1. Date: 10/3/2012 4:49:00 AM

    Check FB message.

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Beautiful and sad.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Yesha. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Congratulations Yesha a very good write xx

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:00:00 AM

    Lovely poem Yesha. The oxymoron is on point. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 9:03:00 PM

    YESHA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:03:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, Yesh! Jag

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:51:00 PM

    congrats on your win Yesha

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:37:00 PM

    Well done Yesha. I really enjoyed this poem. congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 4:57:00 PM

    Yesha, this is a lovely piece and well deserved of it's win..one love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 2:15:00 PM

    Great rhythm, rhyme, and flow to this winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 2:06:00 PM

    congratulations dear Yeshu on another super fantastic win...

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:49:00 PM

    way to go, yesha. you did very well with the theme and in this contest. A wonderful poem. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Well done, Yesha! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 11:04:00 AM

    Very nice Yesha. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:47:00 AM

    This is a very wonderful picture of silence painted by your words in a creative way, Yesha. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. luv, leonora

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:32:00 PM

    Very descriptive, Yesha. I love that last line.

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 6:13:00 PM

    Yes, sound of an empty can is a great metaphor..Very creative..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:01:00 PM

    thaks for dropping by, yesh.. got somehting new brewing???..:) huggggs

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:48:00 AM

    Hey this is wonderful, so profound, it's a classic, Yesha

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:41:00 PM

    DEEP POEM!! I liked it a lot!! So much said in such few words. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Very apt descriptions of an empty heart in these three lines.A touching write.Best wishes to you.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:56:00 AM

    such emotional appeal, yesh.. enjoyed the melody of your rhyme like a certain melancholic silence... superbly done!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Yesha I like the oxymoron in this, very good...David