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shoots a laser gun

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shoots a laser gun

shoots a laser gun
at rows of quick aliens - -
they invade with ease

for Gwendolen’s Video Game Extravaganza contest

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  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:28:00 AM
    few lines, but great stuff within! good luck

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:40:00 AM
    You brought back memories with this one Jack, can't remember when last I played a video game.. hope your weekend is a brilliant one my friend :) lfde Wilma

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Jack, I like it, good luck, hope you enter my latest one...David

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 12:02:00 AM
    You did it again, making a shortie poem that really works for this contest!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 9:25:00 PM
    What a fabulously incredible write my friend! I simple love these shorter writes and this once didn't disappoint me! Watch out for those dang aliens, they invade quickly and are fierce when they do arrive! Wonderful poem Jack! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 7:04:00 PM
    Hi, Jack... ha..i'm a video game lover... I love gaming on fighting... I' don't do shooting games.. and i will never grow up..lol..good luck in Rix..contest.....xox~pd

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Good one...Winner of the game and contest..Enjoyed your humorous work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:27:00 PM
    Groooovy! Fast action in a fast action Haiku!! Good luck in the contest... Terry