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Breaking Bars

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Below is the poem entitled Breaking Bars which was written by poet Jordan Dickinson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Breaking Bars

Please don’t forget to see-
For you know I surely will be-
Here to give your wildest wishes-
With this hope in our most gentle kisses-

When life turns dark and grey-
Never far from your side I’ll stray-
My hands are ready to hold your burdens-
With each new secret, a little now lightens-

To hope you see you dull the stars-
With a soul lost deep behind bars-

To me you matter more than a lot-
With each new battle together we fought-
We will get stronger, two’s a pair-
And with each other this love we share-

Because my love you dull the stars-
And with my love, I’ll break those bars-

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  1. Date: 8/11/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Endearing write. Loved the flow and wording, with a positive ending!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:16:00 PM
    love the flow and rhyme,great write Jordan

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:35:00 PM
    Very very good. Enjoyed. Michael