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Away

I stopped to ask;
Do I look a bit away?
Do I seem a bit away?
When you talk a bit away?
When I talk a bit away?
When you’re silent bit away?
When I’m silent bit away?
Do I look a bit away,
when I say a bit away?
Dear god I don’t want to move away,
not to move a bit away.
But the tunnels fill with water and the streams are words you say.
The miners drown in silence absent moments make night a day.
Where was I?

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:03:00 PM

    it has potential.... LINDA

    Žilic Avatar Nikola Žilic Date: 5/4/2013 7:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks LINDA that makes me feel all warm n shit
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 1:59:00 PM

    Beautiful day to be reading and enjoying poetry Nikola. Hope to be back reading more in a week or so. Love, Carol