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Salvation

Severed tendrils of hope hang lifeless
As antiquated memories of lost dreams 
Lie in a forbidden zone surrounded by silence.
Validation is hard fought for, and soon becomes
Another deception as I lie lost, misplaced, bleeding.
Trepidation slows the endless journey to victory as 
I gaze into life’s mirror and search for elusive answers. But somehow,
Onward I continue, knowing deep within my soul that perseverance
Not only will lead to salvation, but allow me to find peace at last.





Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan 
Contest Name: Acrostic contest - theme LOST  

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  1. Date: 8/10/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 9:05:00 PM
    lc.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in my contest! it's hard to find those answers...

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/9/2012 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Susan! Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 10:08:00 PM
    Well done on your win. Lee

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/9/2012 11:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lee. :) Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 7:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/9/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Joyce. :) Lucretia xx
  1. Date: 8/8/2012 3:45:00 PM
    I really like this one and how it became so optimistic in the end. big congrats on your win. GREAT poem

    Crouse Avatar Lucretia Crouse
    Date: 8/8/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much, Andrea. :) Lucretia xx