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About This Poem

Alone Or Alive

                 If today left me..
       Would tomorrow be my friend..
                  Alone or alive..
            A choice not answered..
        Just a daydream in my night..
            Tasting my own breath..

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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/22/2012 3:53:00 PM
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    Dear Michael, sweet lover of ours... I'm always looking forward to new friends... leaving the old ones ...is what makes life more and more confusing... your words your breath.. swim within my inner thoughts... I know how it feels to be alone and alive at the same time.... it's a voice only I can feel and taste... luv...pd
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    Doreen Wright
    Date: 8/17/2012 10:19:00 PM
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    This is a deep senryu Michael! I read it twice and going to read twice more lol!!
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    Tanya Harrington
    Date: 8/16/2012 2:02:00 PM
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    Intriging thought! :) Tanya

    Harrington Avatar Tanya Harrington Date: 8/16/2012 2:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Intriguing, that is. LOL
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 8/12/2012 8:11:00 AM
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    "Just a daydream in my night.." I just love that line MJF.. You got me smiling with your comment on the last one, it will only be you lol love & hugs CTH

    Neels Avatar Wilma Neels Date: 8/12/2012 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No worries, I get you :)
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    cory long
    Date: 8/11/2012 1:55:00 PM
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    I like where you are going with this thought of yours.. We should write a collab together soon.. Thanks for all your continued support and encouraging words ..your friend cory
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 8/8/2012 10:01:00 AM
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    is it bad breath? if so, I have some mints ;) very pensive piece - what made you think of it?
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/8/2012 7:47:00 AM
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    Small, but very well done....tomorrow never come.... take care of the day ! - huggs Anne-Lise :)
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/8/2012 3:13:00 AM
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    Hey Bronx Buddy, very cool my friend, I like a lot...David
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    Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
    Date: 8/7/2012 10:33:00 PM
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    Fantastic senryu duo, Michael! Just a daydream in my night...wow, what a great line! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/7/2012 8:02:00 PM
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    wow, what a stunning tanka, Michael. Love when you write like this!!
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/7/2012 6:43:00 PM
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    Wow the power of your words is exhilarating my friend! I am amazed at the depth of what you speak of! I've been there, oh yeah, I have! I've been deep, so I know it when I see it! Wow, Michael, I just love this incredible piece! Great Work!!


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