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About This Poem

Two Worlds Colliding

     The minuscule bird
             Flossing the crocodile’s teeth.
      …Respect the furore.

   The sprouting green shoot
             Sucking in raging waters
   …Nature’s mystery.



© Vicky Tsiluma 
    For Russell Sivey’s ‘Two World’s Colliding’ Contest

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    Stephenson Mark
    Date: 11/15/2012 5:55:00 AM
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    Wow awesome
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    Ralph Mason
    Date: 9/16/2012 9:05:00 PM
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    well done!
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    Sizo Hlophe
    Date: 9/15/2012 4:28:00 AM
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    Great piece, loving it. Keep up the great work :)
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    chipepo lwele
    Date: 9/7/2012 10:22:00 AM
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    Vicky,I love the poem.keep it up.
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 9/6/2012 11:51:00 AM
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    Russell liked this one and so do I. Congratulations on your win.
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 8/26/2012 12:19:00 PM
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    How have I missed your work? Excellent. BG
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    kathryn collins
    Date: 8/26/2012 11:32:00 AM
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    So love the flossing the crocodile's teeth. Absolutely well-deserved win. Congratulations. love, Kathy
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/18/2012 2:37:00 PM
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    Great nature work..Excellent topic..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 8/16/2012 5:52:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Vicky. Love, Carol
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 8/15/2012 11:41:00 PM
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    VICKY, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/14/2012 7:12:00 PM
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    wow, you did great with this contest. Congrats on a well deserved win. Love the imagery of the tiny bird as floss.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 8/12/2012 6:24:00 PM
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    Really liked these! I don't believe you need the cap's or the ... yet the message is so colorfull! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 8/12/2012 11:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Debbie.
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/12/2012 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tanka is 5/7/5/7/7
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    David Williams
    Date: 8/12/2012 2:29:00 AM
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    Vicky congrats on your great win....love this one..David
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 8/11/2012 11:32:00 AM
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    Great imagery in this, Vicky. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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    Joseph May
    Date: 8/11/2012 8:56:00 AM
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    congrats on a great win Vicky
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    Terry O'Leary
    Date: 8/10/2012 10:35:00 AM
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    Great contrast! Terry (By the way, Vicky, gla I could make you lol)

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 8/14/2012 5:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always.
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    david scott
    Date: 8/10/2012 9:50:00 AM
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    nice introsprective captures the moment beautifuly xx davd scott
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    Justin Bordner
    Date: 8/9/2012 9:28:00 PM
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    Beautiful Vicky! This is a piece Egyptians,in particular,are sure to adore - You got me meditating again,thanks - J.A.B. %
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 8/7/2012 7:32:00 AM
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    I like this take on the subject..well done. BG
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/7/2012 5:11:00 AM
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    Very well done Vicky, for the contest - Hope you win. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)


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