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Blowing a Kiss to You


The last ounce of breath
Will rest upon your sweet lips
A confirmation!
As I blow this kiss to you
It’s a measure of my love

© 7/8/2012

to any female who wants to catch it  (sorry Michael couldn't choose just one!)

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 2:03:00 AM

    short and sweet!!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 6:56:00 AM

    ..Aawww..can I?.. :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 6:42:00 AM

    NICE WORK, GLAD TO BE BACK

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Ah! Absolutely beautiful! Received and treasured! Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:55:00 PM

    Do you hear all the women swooning?? :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:54:00 PM

    Have fun my friend.

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:21:00 PM

    lol, you ole smoothie! Great fun, my friend - oops, yes, I was one of the ones who got the form wrong in your last contest

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 1:54:00 PM

    I'll catch your kiss and return one. Just have to think.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 10:47:00 AM

    Tanka-licious smooch, David! Glad this wasn't for Michael! lol lol....gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 8:04:00 PM

    very nice work

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Hi David your tanka is brill I like it , all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 5:54:00 AM

    with stormy winds blowing here, i may need a hose to catch this, david... oh so fine!.:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 5:48:00 AM

    The poem NO TOUCH is for mystery man.God give me the strength not to seek him out again.

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 5:43:00 AM

    Morning David, What a glorious day...my top is down...Apart from my sister and mystery man,you're David, my driving instructor. Is this OK with you? You can phone a friend... but I need I final answer in 60 seconds. The clock is ticking..and I have a powerful steed outside, just waiting for me to mount....

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:31:00 PM

    AWESOME, David. I will wear my baseball mitt to be sure to catch it. heehee. A sure win I'm thinking!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Where are you? I've been waiting all day... I need answers...NOW!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 2:51:00 PM

    Thanks for the comment David, love the tanka.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 9:47:00 AM

    Love this poem David, I caught it!! lol Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:19:00 AM

    That was a clever thing to do! Sweet write this, enjoyed!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Ah, the romance within this sweet, sweet write! As you probably knew already, I would just love this poem immensely! And I so do love it my friend! What a fantastic piece David, oh the romance is seething from the core of the write, such beauty in this! I really do love this passionate poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:36:00 AM

    Nice David! Ill catch any kiss blown my way lol...

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:28:00 AM

    I just love this David, I am sure MJF will too :) gotta smile at your footnote here! I caught mine all the way here in Cape Town :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Where in Ireland do your friends live?? Please don't say Kells..

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:49:00 AM

    thank you for my placement in your contest David,been sick with case of food poisoning,so I am all down and out but just came by to thank you.

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 5:46:00 AM

    Back now..I deleted them after Rachel made me afraid...very afraid... of her comments. It is a complete pain in the ass today, as it means I now have to type all my poems out again on word, for this crowd in Dublin..Or can you transfer from one word document to the other? They all all stored in about six of them.....save my life AND I could tidy my house...it is starting to smell!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:48:00 AM

    Listen, rushing as usual to take my daughter to work and shop... Have to have final proof finished today. HAVE Included DRIVING INSTRUCTOR. NO NAMES MENTIONED.....

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:46:00 AM

    Ans you have SO many admiring females on this website..

    Young Avatar Gina Young Date: 8/7/2012 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Men are so oblivious...
    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 8/7/2012 4:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Do I..????
  1. Date: 8/7/2012 3:38:00 AM

    Very smooth my friend!!! Love it!! This too was an idea of mine but I read someone elses poem that sent a kiss to the soup community..so I just picked a person...excellent Tanka here David...a winner!!